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         The hook of this article actually did get my attention. I wanted to know what specific story would her grandma tell in times like these. It definitely made me want to read more to find out. I really like all the stories she included from people who were just trying to [...]

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The hurricane was pretty cool.
The whole class was bored.
I drove into a clown on the road.

1. During one of my travels, I was fortunate enough to get to see a hurricane in action. The wild, angry wind was blowing so hard it felt like it could lift me up and carry me away. 

2. As the [...]

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1. Rittenberg hooks the reader by stating that his dad was upset while talking to his mom about his future. Its something that would intrigue an 18 year old because we know exactly how he must have felt when he heard his dad get upset, especially about his future. 
2/3. He talks about how his grandparents [...]

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While listening to this essay i started to think about how it would be almost impossible to not be digital. There is no way i could ever give up my computer or cell phone. This might make me sound materialistic but I’m an 18 year old in America. Don’t get me wrong I love watching [...]

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    In the past years I believe the one writing assignment that has had a large influence on me was my autobiographical letter. It made me take a look at my future as well as my past. I got to analyze important events within my life that changed me. I have been asked to write [...]

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